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A Terrible BeautyA pane of glass, in all its beautiful simplicity  was important to me on this day   
It's crystal clear straight cut edge, clean and glistening  in the setting sun  as if sheared by a diamond guillotine, reflected ribbons  of beautiful orange light from glowing lamps all around me  into my eyes  lifting my heart  as if it were ablaze   
On the other side of this window  a far more bitter story is told.  the high pitched crack, painful to my ears  comes as the glass shatters  its jigsaw pieces eerie  in the darkness  of the abandoned room behind.  Shards A Terrible Beauty
by ~Offsplit
Anti-InstinctivismMark a boundary  tell me what you think  I'll listen to you, but I already know your'e wrong  you dont think the same way I do  you dont see things the same  when you live like I do, you start to really understand   
Pain is not a bad feeling, it's just a perception  what then marks the boundary between pleasure and pain?  should we be afraid of pleasure?  why not?  you're afraid of pain, they are both the same,  so what is it that makes you think otherwise?   
If law and order doesn't work, maybe it isn't the answer,  you dont know until you try  you've been boug Anti-Instinctivism
by ~Offsplit
Nothing but the TruthPeople seem to serve no purpose anymore  All running around chasing things  that instinct should abhore.   
But millenia of change and learning to evolve  have turned us against ourselves  corrupting us to the core.   
we think we are making ourselves better  but sadly thats not true  what makes things even worse  is we are dragging everything else down too. Nothing but the Truth
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Mark a Boundary... Revision

Wed Feb 13, 2008, 6:37 AM
I have decided to revise my poem "mark a boundary" and convert it from a poem into a full short piece of literature as I have been informed it has potential. It will be a completely different piece so I will leave the original up in my gallery for viewing.

any advice from my watchers is very welcome, especially other writers.

Thanks for taking the time to read this.

I hope you look forward to my revamp of this poem. I think you will all enjoy. =D

Thank you.

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  • Mood: Zest
  • Listening to: maths teacher
  • Reading: what im writing...?
  • Watching: my fellow students =D

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  • Current Residence: Maidstone
  • Interests: Music, Poetry, Skateboarding
  • Favourite movie: Fight Club
  • Favourite band or musician: Anti-Flag, Mr. bungle
  • Favourite genre of music: Not picky
  • Favourite artist: Munch [for his amazing legendary "the scream" obv =D]
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  • Favourite style of art: Surreal
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  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox 360
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~Scalywings Feb 15, 2008, 11:10:52 AM
Hey thanks for the faves and the watch!
Say Hai to my brother for me ;)

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I don't trust you. You can't count to 21 unless you're naked.
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Mood: Confused ~Offsplit Feb 15, 2008, 11:22:27 AM
Awhaaaaaa? how you know who i am?

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"Can we fix it? Yes we can!" - Bob the Builder
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~Scalywings Feb 15, 2008, 11:25:59 AM
I noticed your location was my original hometown and your age matches my brothers :P so I guessed you must be a friend of his, and not ollie cause he's on your watch list Nyehehehhee...
:D Cool to see you on dA

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I don't trust you. You can't count to 21 unless you're naked.
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~Offsplit Feb 15, 2008, 11:29:12 AM
hm. i suppose thats a fair assumption to make. XD yeah ive had da for ages but only just started to use it

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"Can we fix it? Yes we can!" - Bob the Builder
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~Scalywings Feb 15, 2008, 7:16:00 PM
:D I sometimes forget about it and then do a massive upload like 10 pictures at once lol. Most of the time my stuff just collects dust until someone chivvies me into getting the scanner out or typing something up hehe

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I don't trust you. You can't count to 21 unless you're naked.
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~mathclassdoodler Feb 13, 2008, 4:58:08 PM
YAY! ur back!

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92% percent of teens said they would be dead if A&F said it wasnt cool to breath anymore. Post this if you'd be 1 person of the 8% standing there laughing.

some people say i'm crazy. those people would be correct.

does anyone read this thing?
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Mood: Joy ~xjinjix Oct 31, 2007, 5:53:04 AM
heya! hows u???

xxxx

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ur havin a bubble u yogurt top!
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Mood: Joy ~10th-bubble Oct 23, 2007, 12:07:28 AM
HAH! I GOT ONE OF MY NEW CRAPY WORKS FACORATISED YES!
IT ROCKS :P

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YAY SUGAR!

^w^

we all love it..white and stuff...

who knows what it brings....ooo yhea rotting teeth
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~mathclassdoodler Oct 22, 2007, 7:42:33 PM
hola! hey, can i ask you about ur avatar? i'm kinda stupid, so i'm not quite sure what it is. . .it looks cool, like a ghost or something, but like i said, i'm not the smartest person ever. . .

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92% percent of teens said they would be dead if A&F said it wasnt cool to breath anymore. Post this if you'd be 1 person of the 8% standing there laughing.

some people say i'm crazy. those people would be correct.

does anyone read this thing?
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~Offsplit Nov 13, 2007, 1:29:45 AM
i dont know its just a picture :/

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"Can we fix it? Yes we can!" - Bob the Builder
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