Mark a Boundary... Revisionany advice from my watchers is very welcome, especially other writers.
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I hope you look forward to my revamp of this poem. I think you will all enjoy.
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Ergonomics.by ~Offsplit
A Terrible BeautyA pane of glass, in all its beautiful simplicity was important to me on this dayA Terrible Beauty
It's crystal clear straight cut edge, clean and glistening in the setting sun as if sheared by a diamond guillotine, reflected ribbons of beautiful orange light from glowing lamps all around me into my eyes lifting my heart as if it were ablaze
On the other side of this window a far more bitter story is told. the high pitched crack, painful to my ears comes as the glass shatters its jigsaw pieces eerie in the darkness of the abandoned room behind. Shards
by ~Offsplit
Anti-InstinctivismMark a boundary tell me what you think I'll listen to you, but I already know your'e wrong you dont think the same way I do you dont see things the same when you live like I do, you start to really understandAnti-Instinctivism
Pain is not a bad feeling, it's just a perception what then marks the boundary between pleasure and pain? should we be afraid of pleasure? why not? you're afraid of pain, they are both the same, so what is it that makes you think otherwise?
If law and order doesn't work, maybe it isn't the answer, you dont know until you try you've been boug
by ~Offsplit
Nothing but the TruthPeople seem to serve no purpose anymore All running around chasing things that instinct should abhore.Nothing but the Truth
But millenia of change and learning to evolve have turned us against ourselves corrupting us to the core.
we think we are making ourselves better but sadly thats not true what makes things even worse is we are dragging everything else down too.
by ~Offsplit
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:readplz:by `LeoLeonardo
Circular DedicationThe single most important shape Is a ringCircular Dedication
You can see through it And penetrate its threshold into A world of dedication - promises with golden value
Circular promises Which are polished, cared for And mirror those who made them
They are topped with
Precious stones To multiply the promises - a kaleidoscopic effect
But most of all, they remind us That because all promises are
Circular They create further need for Dedication
by ~Czarewich
The Mountain There she was: the most beautiful angel to grace my serene landscape. She had ethereal eyes more crisp than the clearest stream. I remember how she stopped far off from me, dressed in her white winter parka, the straps of her backpack hidden on her shoulders. Hanging pots and pans clanked as she walked, but became still and silent as she was stricken breathless at the sight of me.The Mountain
I stood taller than any man she had ever known. I was a force of nature. She sighed, still shaken by the scene. I was more stunned. I caved at the very sight of her. My surface fell apart
by ~Czarewich
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